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what if i
Contributed by
breezyweezy
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Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 04:53:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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what if i were to do tomorrow,
and never told you how i really feel?
would you spend the rest of your life,
wondering if our love was real?
what if i were to die tomorrow,
and were never see you again?
i'd be dug 6 feel under,
it would never work out then
what if i were to die tomorrow,
never to find out you feel the same way?
if thats the case, lets not talk about tomorrow
let's talk about today
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2008-11-03 16:53:35]
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Re: what if i
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 05:23:05 PM AEST
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| This is a really beautiful poem. Great Job! |
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Re: what if i
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by Voice of the Silent on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 06:25:12 PM AEST
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Great poem
think of the now and not the then and not what will be
also a solution ask them now if the love you
but I'm rambling great poem
-kelly |
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Re: what if i
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by Anonymous44 on
Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 09:49:08 PM AEST
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| great poem....good job |
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