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A Star
Contributed by
black-thorn
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Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 01:03:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I once heard that the sun is a star,
And stars are comforting.
If you look up at the velveteen night sky,
They're there.
Like a million tiny woodpeckers pecked
At a sheet of indigo untill they found light,
Billions of specks of light.
To guide and protect,
Comforting and close.
I once heard that the sun is a star.
I like that
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black-thorn
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2008-11-03 13:03:01]
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Re: A Star
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by lnnie on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 03:31:32 PM AEST
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This is a tremendous write. Original.
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Re: A Star
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 04:19:54 PM AEST
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You know what, I like to sit in the hot tub on cool evenings
in my back yard just so I can put my head back and look up
at the beautiful clear night sky. I always find peace, comfort,
and hope, knowing that the creator of this vast universe, who
made that awesome sky, also made me and loves me too.
Blessings,
Robert Edgar "Lawdog" Burns
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Re: A Star
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by emystar on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 04:28:25 PM AEST
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Welcome to our global family here at ypdc.
Thesethoughts-n-words are really interesting.
very pleasent read.
huggs,
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Re: A Star
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 10:05:47 AM AEST
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im back!!
this is soo beautiful,
come on, write some more!
beth |
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