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Downstream
Contributed by
Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow
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Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 03:45:00 PM in AEST
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Downstream
The peaceful sound, of a gentle river
Flowing easily downstream
Makes me wonder, how a little further down
Can turn the softest sound, into a roaring thunder
The silky white clouds above
Dance across the soft blue sky
And I watch, as a dove, is about to get lost
In the dark gray clouds about to arrive
Walking through the streets, you can see people
Aren’t as nice as they can be
It’s like looking for a rose in a garden of weeds
Finding someone how shows a little hospitality
Passing by the rapids, after the falls
Looking past all the roughs of the stream
You can hear the once familiar sound of the
River flowing, passing by, softly, slowly
To gentle sound of the dove in its home
In the nest of a tree, far away from the dark clouds
Will I be able to find some hospitality
Will I find some friend faces
Will I find that rose in the garden of weeds
If I go a little further downstream
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Re: Downstream
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 06:46:24 AM AEST
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This is very thought provoking. I never really thought of life like that. We all have ups and downs, dramas and tanquility. I like your style of writing aswell.
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Re: Downstream
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 10:30:08 PM AEST
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| ahhhh so beautiful! i love this:) thank you for sharing, hugs nessa |
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