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~Holding on with both hands~
Contributed by
shelby
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Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 01:54:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
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We oft speak of love, easy to say.
Actions speak louder than words.
Absurd to think that little word
could be so hard to understand or believe.
Holding on with both hands
to find the other letting go.
The hands getting slippery
the hands of time moving slow.
The word believe seems a bit harder.
It seems you have given up on that word.
You took a step forward
now you have taken twenty back.
I see you falling, the feeling is hollow
the landslide is coming, I watch you go.
Nothing to say, no more to do.
Holding on with both hands, waving goodbye to you.
I turn my back and walk away.
Holding my truth in the palm of my hand.
If you do not know it by now,
I have held on for a life time to you with both hands.
It is the letting go, the truth and the mystery.
The past and the time we made our own history.
Watch it all float and drift before my eyes.
There is nothing left, I believe I lived in a lie.
The lie of you........ who took me for granted.
Such a waste of all the years and the friendship
or was it one sided all along??????
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-11-03 01:54:39]
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Re: ~Holding on with both hands~
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by karoody on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 05:49:18 AM AEST
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It hurts so badly sometimes
The betrayal we find in life
when we thought we had comfort...
Know that you are better than this.
You are a loving soul.
You do have people who truly love you and they see it...
hugs....
Kara |
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Re: ~Holding on with both hands~
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by navydocny on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 11:00:19 AM AEST
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You deal with this a lot better than me...
Great write as always...
Great imagery as well...
You always pour so much into this...
Steve |
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Re: ~Holding on with both hands~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 01:19:06 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this. Sometimes I woinder if all my friendships where one sided. anyway, excellent write! |
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Re: ~Holding on with both hands~
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by little_genna on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 04:35:30 PM AEST
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right now this poem makes me feel like a i have a split personality cuz i feel both sides of it. i walked away from a relationship for complicated reasons. i still was in love with the guy... then i met someone new and he left almost instantly because he's military... but now i doubt my feelings for the first guy and whether i ever felt them...
anyway this is an amazing write and you write about something so painful with no anger? i dont know how you did it but this poem is amazing and makes me want to hug you and tell u that u r better than this and deserve so much more..
take care..
Gen x |
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Re: ~Holding on with both hands~
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 05:00:31 PM AEST
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Love can and does grow cold with absences and we seek
to fill the voids, but in reality, true love, by it's very
definition, is unconditional, and without any preconditions
attached or as being based on ones performance. Also,
there is freedom in forgiveness That's the only way your
scars can heal themselves. We have all been there. If
you forgive your enemies even, the Bible says you heal
yourself and by doing them good in return for their evil,
you pour coals of fire onto their heads.
Blessings,
Robert Edgar "Lawdog" Burns |
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Re: ~Holding on with both hands~
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 05:41:49 PM AEST
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Oh hun...this is such a painful write....but you wrote about it so eloquently.... hope the healing is quick...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: ~Holding on with both hands~
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by Crow on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 06:51:04 PM AEST
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| Shel if this is just a dark write like sometimes you do..wow, good work. you know if something is wrong i`m around to talk with you..love ya hon...Lane |
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Re: ~Holding on with both hands~
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by emystar on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 08:14:53 PM AEST
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Girlfriend,
I feel what you r saying. Sorry my fingers don't seem to be moving on commsnd.
Been there done that. I know it hurts but time does heal. U know that.
This write is burning up in flames. It shows your heart, mind soul and if he can't see that it's his loss.
Luv will come in time and them that only say the words will wanting you back some day and he's gonna won't you to come back but u won't go or if you do he'll be change 'cause u like me, u don't gotta take no one's ****>
I'm so proud to be your friend.
luv ya gal and you'll know what to do.
Luv, huggs, blessings, peace, joy,
emy |
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Re: ~Holding on with both hands~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th November 2008 @ 07:13:15 AM AEST
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michelle,
This piece carries so many emotions,
Good and bad, dark yet understanding.
I know these feelings all too well.
Great write..........Mike |
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