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A Chance Worth Taking
Contributed by
Chamaron
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Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 11:14:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Watching the minutes gather,
Wishing they wouldn’t blow away.
An impossibility I hold in my arms
With no words good enough to say.
World continues all around us
So beautiful I cringe and hide.
Thinking only of what I can’t lose,
A war of thought fought inside.
A stumbling toddler reaching out,
Emerging from a rolling ball of fear.
Unable to spill those little words,
All I know is that I want you here.
Copyright ©
Chamaron
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2008-11-02 23:14:18]
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Re: A Chance Worth Taking
(User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 06:58:42 AM AEST
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I applaud you on this write!
If you never ask, you'll never get that yes!
I love this...
Thank you...
Love smiles blessings
Kara
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Re: A Chance Worth Taking
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by little_genna on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 04:40:17 PM AEST
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i wanted someone to stay with me.. but he couldnt even though he wanted to.
nice write with so few words portraying so much emotion.. my favorite kind of write.
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