|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Its alwaws rainin above me
Contributed by
outlawpoet
on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 09:51:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
There is a big black cloud looming over my head
I lay down to sleep and it creeps over my bed
So I step outside to clear my brain
And wouldnt ya know it started to rain
Its been this way all through my present and past
But someone once told me that stormy weather never lasts
Well i hope that its true what someone once said
Cause it seems it'll be rainin till im found somewhere dead
Troubled by the pain soaked by the rain turned to bones and ash
But someone once told me that stormy weather never lasts
Copyright ©
outlawpoet
... [
2008-11-02 09:51:54]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Its alwaws rainin above me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Recyclebin on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 10:36:41 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
ur going to be deeply missed Cowboy.
~Bin~ |
|
|
Re: Its alwaws rainin above me
(User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 12:15:59 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Rain isn't always bad, it can be cleansing. But you will be missed. I agree. I really do.
Take care, okay?
Hugs
kara |
|
|
Re: Its alwaws rainin above me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflyperfect on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 12:22:02 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
What can I say to this. Its very good and well written.
I can't wait for you to be inspired again.
-Butterfly |
|
|
Re: Its alwaws rainin above me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 05:11:54 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Great write and I liked the way it flowed
but went there's dark and stormy weather in your head
that just means something dark should be said
my point being write how you feel I don't find inspiration I just write from the top of my head most of the time
but hope you write again soon I enjoy reading what you write |
|
|
Re: Its alwaws rainin above me
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 01:25:31 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Oh hey now you just came back, whats up with this not being in spired ????????
I liked the poem and hey talk to raindancermyst, rain is good, dance in a puddle or slip in the mud and fall on ur arssssss that will give ya some in spir ation ROFLMAO
hope you are not gone to long
Hugs
Michelle |
|
|
Re: Its alwaws rainin above me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 03:53:35 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I can really relate to this. This is great writing! |
|
|
Re: Its alwaws rainin above me
(User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 07:51:46 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I like this one lots.
:) |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
