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I'm Alive
Contributed by
Recyclebin
on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 01:15:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The sun beams through the window,
awaken, gently rubbing my eyes .
The pressure lifted from my soul
I feel whole like a crystal clear blue sky.
Standing out on the porch, stretching,
I see the leaves floating downstream.
So thankful to be alive, breathing,
One more day to once again dream.
The breeze moves every
hair follicle like a symphony.
The trees waving like,
Dancing Angels, all in harmony.
The sound of everything living
Coats the inner ears.
Beyond the valley, the mountain
So pristine, the beauty premiers.
I’m in awe; I’m not a religious man,
But whatever made this picture visible to me.
Must have a higher power, a plan too enchant
thee, a path to follow…. as I sip my mountain tea,
I believe,
that there is a course to take for us all.
Wherever that may lead,
like when summer transcends to fall.
Not knowing where this road leads,
we keep moving , because we have too.
Smiling, and I’m crystal clear, like that blue sky,
on every detail of life’s point of view.
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Recyclebin
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Re: I'm Alive
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by Butterflyperfect on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 01:25:39 AM AEST
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I think you can brighten the sky for me to. I like the message and I'm glad I am on to read it.
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Re: I'm Alive
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by exiled on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 01:28:30 AM AEST
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| Great read. |
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Re: I'm Alive
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 02:12:29 AM AEST
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Supurb!
Take a bow,
Now dats what I'm talkin about.
Arkansas huggs, smiles, angels dancing with Sugar Curls,
emy
Can't wait till she ask u anotha question. |
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Re: I'm Alive
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by karoody on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 02:43:43 AM AEST
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Thank you so much!!!!
I loved this and it does brighten my skies!!!
I am sincerely touched by this.
Hmmm
Now I need another question to ask...
Emy, Give me something to ask.! :-)
Thank you again
Huge hugs
Kara |
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Re: I'm Alive
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by brew on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 05:00:39 PM AEST
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Very sweet read. This could brighten many. Your writings are good. Thanks for sharing.
brew~ |
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Re: I'm Alive
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 08:02:29 PM AEST
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Great imagery, Bin...I LOVE this.... it is one of my favs of yours now.... Thank you for sharing this....
Jenni
BTW, it couldn't have been written for a more deserving gal... |
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Re: I'm Alive
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 03:24:10 AM AEST
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Wow, this is definitely a beautiful poem with great imagery and a great message. A great write! Thanks,
Tim |
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