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~A Whole New World~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Saturday, 1st November 2008 @ 11:06:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Today I held you for the first time
And it felt as though a whole new world had opened up for me.
A world filled with smiles,
A world of hope,
A world of peace,
A world of love.
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Four years ago
When your brother died
I was devastated.
I never thought I would experience joy again.
But tonight you proved me wrong.
You opened up my heart again,
You brought back the twinkle in my eyes;
The smiles to my lips.
And the bounce in my stride.
Tonight
I want you to know
The world is yours for the taking
And I will always be there for you,
Cheering you on,
Pushing you to be your best
And loving you unconditionally.
Welcome to my world,
Precious Celina.
~~^~~
01.11.08
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
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2008-11-01 23:06:33]
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Re: ~A Whole New World~
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by karoody on
Saturday, 1st November 2008 @ 11:27:48 PM AEST
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Jenni~
This is sweet!
You made me smile!
Did you know my middle name is Celene?
That's funny!
Your new family member and I share a name with the moon goddess....
Loves ya
Congratulations again
Huge hugs
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Re: ~A Whole New World~
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by Butterflyperfect on
Saturday, 1st November 2008 @ 11:36:01 PM AEST
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Your poem was amazing and that is all I can really say. I was almost ready to cry. Congratulations!
Take Care,
-Butterflyperfect |
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Re: ~A Whole New World~
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by Crow on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 12:02:09 AM AEST
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| that baby is beautiful Jenni..thank you for sharing new life with us.. Lane |
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Re: ~A Whole New World~
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 12:06:42 AM AEST
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What a priceless, precious gift Jenny,
and the picture is quite angelic. I know
you will treasure her as long as you live,
as I do my own grandkids. Congratulations
to your entire family.
Rob "Lawdog" Burns |
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Re: ~A Whole New World~
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by Recyclebin on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 12:11:38 AM AEST
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Miss Jenni .. you rock! That was an amazing piece.
Yes I concur.... Welcome to our world Precious Celina.
~Bin~
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Re: ~A Whole New World~
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 12:55:28 AM AEST
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Girl,
One can feel the luv, powerfull and awesome joy in this!
Welcome Precious Celina,
We are so glad you arrieved in joy-n-luv.
Girlfriend, I told you years back that God could do it and I had enuff faith for you to get there.
Thank God for sharing heaven with us in this little bundle of luv.
My neice a gave her husband a little girl the same day.
I know there's so much luv jus spreading in these births and you can take that one to the bank
your soul sista,
emy |
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Re: ~A Whole New World~
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by shelby on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 11:38:53 PM AEST
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Oh Jenni,
this is such great news and I love her name too.
I felt your pride and joy in this write not to mention a love that spills over through out.
Blessing to all of you.
Hugs love ya
Shall |
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Re: ~A Whole New World~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 01:12:35 PM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem. Its soo touching. Great Job! |
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Re: ~A Whole New World~
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th November 2008 @ 02:09:16 AM AEST
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I just spotted the photo.
Beautifull.
Blessings, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: ~A Whole New World~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 03:36:26 AM AEST
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Now this is really beautiful Jenni. Congratulations on the new life that is now in your life. It is definitely the best joy ever!
Tim |
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Re: ~A Whole New World~
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by wizard on
Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 09:43:54 AM AEST
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beautifully done jenni,
its easy to be inspired by such a miracle!!
congrats!!
wiz
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Re: ~A Whole New World~
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 12th November 2008 @ 09:22:43 PM AEST
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Dearest Jenni,
very beautiful poem..with your heart beat in every line..I am happy to know this wonderful news.. Blessings to that sweet little lady.
your old friend
Venkat |
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