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Echo
Contributed by
black-thorn
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Saturday, 1st November 2008 @ 04:51:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Echo,
Tell me I'm pretty
pretty
Echo,
Tell me I'm smart
smart
Echo,
Tell me I'm happy
happy
Echo,
Tell me I'm not torn apart
torn apart
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black-thorn
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2008-11-01 04:51:55]
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Re: Echo
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by heartfelt on
Saturday, 1st November 2008 @ 09:10:15 AM AEST
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| i like this piece. i can relate to that feeling. stay fly |
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Re: Echo
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st November 2008 @ 09:15:02 AM AEST
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hey sarage! great poem-shows true feeling.
I'm not your echo-you are pretty and smart,
and you can be happy! :-P
Great write!
Stoney |
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Re: Echo
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 1st November 2008 @ 11:19:07 PM AEST
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Quite interesting..and very creative..
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Re: Echo
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by navydocny on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 12:03:15 AM AEST
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Unique and quite a piece of work...
The last stanza upsets it greatly which I like....
Great write!
Steve |
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