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Distance
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 07:35:55 PM in AEST
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He had a penchant for pising people off
Peaceful ways of postponing pleasure
Consumed by doubt of forecasted weather
He plays with fire while juggling ice
Preparing the night to fade into forever
More not than often he resembles his lost soul
More docile than motion he conveys his world to all
Scared by hurt and repression
He battles for each breathe or more
Willing to put memories aside and look for a future
Humble servants serve his needs and worry about his every move
Taking care not to trample upon the feet of what shall ensue
A perfect tale of deceit and perverted dreams
His mind will not open and see forgiveness lurking
Intimidated by what is behind
Those sad eyes from behind the curtain
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Re: Distance
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by zenith66 on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 09:55:27 PM AEST
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hmm really really nice write., really intriuged me alot and i found your writing to be very sharp and observative, a clearly well dthoguth out piece with a nice poetic flare, this is the best piece i've read all day!!
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Re: Distance
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 12:55:31 PM AEST
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I'm loving all the play on words action here!
More not than often he resembles his lost soul
More docile than motion he conveys his world to all
A perversion of words that only you could pull off :)
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