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In Danger of Loosing Myself
Contributed by
juliestevens18
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Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 04:39:37 PM in AEST
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I am not one for the taking
I break so easily and it's hard to pick up the pieces
when the pieces are so tiny
i am something under a magnifying glass
they watch as I squirm and shuffle
Hoping they don't crush me with their fingers
I loose control with the drop of a hat
I am living my life with anxiety leaking through pores
I want to be done with the pain
But this is my worst poem yet
except it is painfully honest
yesterday I almost saw red
but i turned around and made it blue
yes, water, it washed over me
taking my scars and healing them
healing them
I find meaning in the smallest things
So when I die I want to hear my words blaring out of the speaker
help me write, help me write
I am in danger of loosing myself
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2008-10-31 16:39:37]
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Re: In Danger of Loosing Myself
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by karoody on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 04:48:26 PM AEST
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A very emotional read, you penned it well.
With wishes for brighter days for you soon...
thank you for sharing this
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Re: In Danger of Loosing Myself
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by outlawpoet on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 05:24:14 PM AEST
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| if this is your worst poem yet then the rest must be brilliant, i like this one |
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