|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Smoldering Sigh
Contributed by
Recyclebin
on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 04:31:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
|
You ask of me...to leave as fast as I came..
Just as the wick yields to the flame.
It will flutter in the breeze… as it goes.
even though it cries to glow.
But with a smoldering sigh...
The dark consumes and the flame must die..
But still within, a single ember thrives...
It will do as I...struggles and survives.
Carving twilight like a surgical knife
Once again casting a shadow of life.
Yearning to breathe existence,
Justice to dwell with consistence.
freed from its smoldering smothering cage.
To burn beyond, boundaries of its own rage.
Copyright ©
Recyclebin
... [
2008-10-31 04:31:39]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Smoldering Sigh
(User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 04:56:29 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Bin~
You have said so much in this one. I love the way you gave life to the candle.
Your talent truly amazes me. Great metaphors here, not a word wasted...
love smiles blessings hugs always
kara |
|
|
Re: Smoldering Sigh
(User Rating: 1 )
by outlawpoet on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 05:31:04 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| nice job |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
