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How Dare You
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 12:09:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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How ***** dare you,
Inflict on others, your heart, blue,
Make everyone feel the pain,
When you have only, you to blame.
The isolation that you feel,
You bring upon others, something real,
When the desolate land is yours alone,
Please lay in your bed, make it your home.
Arms and shoulders have been there,
But you were cold, you didn’t care,
Others reached out for your hand,
You tossed away to baron land.
A worm will turn, and it has just,
Once filled with feeling, has gone bust,
You had your chance; you had your ground,
But loneliness it is hell bound.
Look in the mirror see who’s to blame,
No one else would want this fame,
Your hate, jealousy and distaste,
Rules your world, oh what a waste.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2008-10-31 00:09:12]
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Re: How Dare You
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by emystar on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 12:32:16 AM AEST
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You go girl!
tell it like it is.
Good work.
huggs, smiles, blessings,
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Re: How Dare You
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by exiled on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 12:35:56 AM AEST
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awesome, I think this is the first poem of yours I have read, and I really really enjoyed it. I can feel what you were saying, and to me the best put together words in the world mean nothing if you cant feel it.
Looking forward to more,
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Re: How Dare You
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by karoody on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 08:36:40 AM AEST
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Your words came across so powerful! I very thoroughly enjoyed this write and definitely will read more from you!
Thank you
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Re: How Dare You
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 02:48:50 PM AEST
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Great to see a post from you!
Very strong, very emotional and forthright! |
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Re: How Dare You
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by heartfelt on
Saturday, 1st November 2008 @ 11:01:52 AM AEST
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| very nice i enjoyed it. right to the point very powerful |
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Re: How Dare You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 03:39:02 PM AEST
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| I wish I could tell this to those that brought pain to me. This is an awesome poem! |
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Re: How Dare You
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by callme_spart on
Thursday, 20th November 2008 @ 03:31:41 AM AEST
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| very strong and passionate. i liked it a lot |
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Re: How Dare You
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by 2bpositive on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 11:58:17 PM AEST
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emotionally packed with a punch. I almost had to duck.
Great write!
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