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Untitiled
Contributed by
Butterflyperfect
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Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 09:27:32 PM in AEST
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My dreams have been shattered
But i know I'm not alone
My heart has been broken
But with time it can heal
The darkness I've run from
Isn't as scary as it once was
The darkness that consumes me
Is starting to shed some light
Is this the beggining...
Or an Ending?
Copyright ©
Butterflyperfect
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2008-10-30 21:27:32]
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Re: Untitiled
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by emystar on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 03:04:36 AM AEST
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Welcome to our global family here at ypdc.
Awesome writing.
Keep it up.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Untitiled
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by karoody on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 10:45:31 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC! I hope you enjoy it here.
I liked your poem a lot! it was very thought provoking
thank you
kara
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Re: Untitiled
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 1st November 2008 @ 11:58:47 PM AEST
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I'd say it was a beginning...
A lovely write.. hope to see more from you soon.
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Re: Untitiled
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by Recyclebin on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 12:06:24 AM AEST
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In the beginning ~Bin~ picks up the small shattered pieces of a dream, stores them in his heart.... He will give a piece to everyone who needs hope in a dream, until one day that shattered dream becomes whole again. ~The Ending~ Is that same shattered dream will be whole once again, and shine more brightly then ever before on a poet named butterflyperfect.
Excellent write butterfly.... loved it!
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