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hmmmm
Contributed by
outlawpoet
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Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 09:16:34 PM in AEST
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well i walked in the room and saw you standin there
i could not help but to stop and to stare
your eyes they cought mine and i started to blush
i have never known love to be in a rush
the only problem is your not in the room
yeah your so far away
so you choose to let the distance
come between us today
now i see that you could have become
the light of my life
but your walking away and the pain
it cuts like a knife
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2008-10-30 21:16:34]
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Re: hmmmm
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by karoody on
Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 09:33:58 PM AEST
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Sad when two people find them selves in a moment like this. you captured these emotions so well.
love smiles blessings
kara |
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Re: hmmmm
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by exiled on
Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 11:06:28 PM AEST
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| very good write....I think I am going to check out some more of your stuff. |
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Re: hmmmm
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by emystar on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 04:36:41 AM AEST
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Some times it happen that way.
Sad but great writing.
huggs, healing,
emy |
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