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Death Death
Contributed by
outlawpoet
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Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 04:28:55 PM in AEST
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I can hear the voice of one
Crying Crying
I can not place where it is that the tears fall from the face
And melt into the ground
I know not the reason why
But I hear the voice of one
Crying Crying
Maybe off in the distance someone is
Dying Dying
I can not see but only picture one knelt besides their lovers bed
With the angel of death awaiting the last dying breath
Awaiting the last closing of the eyes
And I can hear the voice of one
Crying Crying
I can not see the pain plastered on their faces
Nor do i see the teardrops fall
I can not see the grim uncomforting look on the angels face
As he awaits those who are
Dying Dying
I can only hear the voice of one
Crying Crying
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Re: Death Death
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by exiled on
Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 05:23:09 PM AEST
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| nice write...keem em coming |
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Re: Death Death
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by catz77 on
Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 07:51:41 PM AEST
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You have every right to be excited. This is a good slow read.
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Re: Death Death
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 08:18:05 PM AEST
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Trying different forms of writing can be rough, but I think you did a good job with this. Very emotional.
Well done
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Re: Death Death
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by karoody on
Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 08:43:19 PM AEST
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i agree, you should be excited. it's fun to try new stuff and you have done very well with this one.
love smiles blessings
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