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God's Blessing
Contributed by
ThomasWPeterson
on
Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 12:54:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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God's Blessing
The newborn boy,
takes his first breath;
it feels good to live,
escaping from death.
He shivers and shakes,
while being passed around;
testing his voice,
until Mother is found.
Mom is exhausted,
holding her prize.
She holds Baby tight,
and silently cries.
It's for this birth,
that we must rejoice.
God's message is clear:
Life;
what a beautiful choice.
Copyright ©
ThomasWPeterson
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2008-10-30 12:54:45]
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Re: God's Blessing
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 01:12:31 PM AEST
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I like the piece. But I stumble over the last lines.
If you could smooth it out a bit it would be better, an example;
It is for this life
that we must rejoice.
God's message is clear
what a beautiful choice.
But otherwise what a wonderful message!! |
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Re: God's Blessing
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 01:50:15 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC!!
What a splendid poem!! I am so happy at the moment and this poem just solidifies my faith in God and in Life...
Thank you for sharing this... I just got me a healthy (grand) daughter,..lol... after a somewhat scary pregnancy..
Thanks again..sorry for raving..
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Re: God's Blessing
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by karoody on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 12:30:41 AM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc! I hope you enjoy it here.
Congratulations as well on the new arrival into your world!
Love smiles blessings
kara |
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