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self-defense
Contributed by
elle
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Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 05:03:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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I guard my heart, ahh
I guard it so, with crooked
arrow. . .unstrung bow.
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2008-10-29 17:03:07]
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Re: self-defense
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by outlawpoet on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 06:07:38 PM AEST
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| i love these kind of poems short and to the point good work |
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Re: self-defense
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 06:44:13 PM AEST
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So much said in so few words.
Deep in meaning.
Great write elle........Mike |
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Re: self-defense
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by heartfelt on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 09:10:40 PM AEST
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i like it. the way it grabs my imagination is different.
simple but sweet! |
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Re: self-defense
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 11:56:14 PM AEST
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huge irony within the lines. it seems theres a brokenness even if u want to guard yourself. nice different style u used for the haiku. i enjoyed it. take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: self-defense
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by Spike on
Friday, 7th November 2008 @ 10:47:12 PM AEST
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I can feel the Zen from here - as well as the vulnerability. Simply wonderful.
Spike |
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Re: self-defense
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by Jlokitty on
Tuesday, 25th November 2008 @ 07:55:09 PM AEST
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| that was interesting XD good job! |
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