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Such Is Divine
Contributed by
navydocny
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Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 11:43:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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From where came your love on gilded wing
To clutch so lovingly to thy breast
None good fortune such feelings bring
Veneration I take to thy eternal rest
As newborn babes awash of all sin
Pure as saintly rain on new summer’s morn
Of pageantry splendid discovered therein
Chaste as the breeze after a storm
Just as the sun sets and moon made to rise
Exchanging our tenderness for each other to hold
Soon tells of love’s struggle against demise
Entreating against a darkening forebode
I fight for thine laughter, company, thine love
Dispatched unto me gently from Heaven above
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navydocny
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2008-10-29 11:43:45]
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Re: Such Is Divine
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by Lilymaemax on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 05:40:10 PM AEST
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I hope your wife is reading these poems they are simply beautiful.True old fashioned romancing,We all desire to be wooed in poetic manner.I thought i'd stumbled across a scene from Much ado about nothing.
Hey nonny nonny .
Lilymae |
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Re: Such Is Divine
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 09:05:47 PM AEST
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| what wonderful verse "Doc, from a heart so filled with passion..Lane |
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Re: Such Is Divine
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 11:15:22 PM AEST
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Oh Steve, this is so damn BEAUTIFUL!!! There is much romance and
enchantment mixed inside your words. It could set the coldest heart
aflame! ♥ What a magical and wondrous world you've allowed
your reader access to. I am captivated by your word choices AND by
the simple beauty of your imagery. Damn fine writing, my friend.
Take care of you. I'm so glad you have begun to write these. They are
enchanting ~
*sigh*
~ Breezy
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Re: Such Is Divine
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by Recyclebin on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 11:26:21 PM AEST
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I like this type of poetry.
Very good piece.
I have always desired to be able to write like this, but I guess each poet has their own unique form.
~Bin~
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Re: Such Is Divine
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by karoody on
Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 09:18:13 PM AEST
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Steve~
The sonnet certainly does suit you. Your poetry has always amazed me anyway. You seemed to have picked right up on these.
Hope all is well out there. Take care of yourself.
Love smiles blessings to you and yours always |
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