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Geomidentity
Contributed by
Spike
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Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 08:26:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A life squared away
a circle measuring boundary
triangulated destiny
there to here
lines of demarcation
Angles of trajectory
leading irrevocably to
points of confluence
to arrive
shapeless
indistinct
and without borders
at a new beginning.
Copyright ©
Spike
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2008-10-29 08:26:36]
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Re: Geomidentity
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by zenith66 on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 01:15:23 PM AEST
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i thoutght this was a very very very unique peice. it was so very thoguth provoking and it really is delightfully ambigous. sacred geomatry is so interesting no?
i think you did a graet job with this piece, leading me in many interesting directions and converging at a conlusion!!
that there is none! lol, great work here man!! |
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Re: Geomidentity
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 04:14:28 PM AEST
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BRAVO! Well done Sir Poet! What an exceptionally unique idea. More than clever this is brilliant. The concept you came up with must have been a difficult one to put in a poem right away, but reading this it seems it was mastered almost effortlessly from a skilled poet as yourself. I was blown away. At first before reading I was not sure what to expect. Then I thought you would carry on with this in order to make a geometric life point. But you did it in three stanzas! Dammit! BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO!
Superb!
SCM |
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Re: Geomidentity
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 11:53:04 PM AEST
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Dear spike, I think your "philosophy" on geometry was a brilliant opening for the
words that followed (and metaphor). There is a NEW beginning without borders
and it sails by us at an alarming rate. (Only the conscious and discerning minds notice
it at all, let alone take full advantage).
Thank goodness there is MORE to science than just geometry (or is it mathematical ?)
Whatever the case, life, love, existence is FAR too complex a thing to be "squared away",
you know?
~ Breezy
(PM me, dawg. :P)
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Re: Geomidentity
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by black-thorn on
Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 09:02:00 AM AEST
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wow.
i was swept away with your lines and angles and beginnings!
well done |
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Re: Geomidentity
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by SLou on
Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 09:20:42 AM AEST
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wow. this is really original. i loved it! and i like the way the topic is 'life poetry'. it really says something.
thanks.
sarah |
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