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Opposites
Contributed by
Recyclebin
on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 12:50:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Baby you have broken me down...
and improved the indentation in the soul.
Giving me the feeling of being re-born….
and yet the very thought without you, I would literally die
You have complicated me...
but yet simplified my love.
Imprisoned me....
and at the same time set me free.
Standing still....
but yet I'm still moved.
Lips with out movement....
but still hearing the whispers of love.
Tripping....
but yet dancing back into your arms.
Confused by you...
But understanding what I feel.....
Scared to death...
and still trusting you.
In life there is no guarantee….
Sometimes you have to take a chance.
Trying not to be shallow…
For love is so divine, so deep
I will embrace…
Before you fall away.
Copyright ©
Recyclebin
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2008-10-29 00:50:10]
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Re: Opposites
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 12:54:26 AM AEST
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| I definitely like the analogies in this one and can soooo relate. Good job. |
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Re: Opposites
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by outlawpoet on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 07:06:49 AM AEST
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| i also can relate unfortunatly and good flow i liked it bro |
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Re: Opposites
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 04:09:22 PM AEST
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| Not only have you done a great job on the "opposites". But I am very impressed at the way you pieced them all together...seamlessly! Well done! |
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Re: Opposites
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 04:17:57 PM AEST
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This is a perfect example of your exceptional skill. I thought the way you blended the "opposites" in your work here was poetically fascinating. Your opening was outstanding and what followed did not digress! This is a solid and masterful job! Great to see you back writing and on YPDC! You were missed.
EXCELLENT!
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Re: Opposites
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by karoody on
Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 11:08:08 PM AEST
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Love is a beautifully confusing creature isn't it? I loved this write. You have shown so much depth here
love smiles blessings
kara |
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