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Broken
Contributed by
MaRyDoNtUwAnNa
on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 09:47:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I can remember it like yesterday
Coming home from work
my feet burning and the smell of bear
and in the shadows he lurks
cloths thrown from here to there
leading to the bedroom door
the last thing i thought i would find
is him finding on the floor
Three years of giving and giving
three years of selfless love
given up with one night
with one thoughtless shove.
My heart burns with thought of hate
with reasons why I deserve it
I had gave everthing I had
but you had to take it for granite
Maybe I'm destined to be alone
with all the thoughts in my mind
Maybe god wants me to deal with it
But will it be in time
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MaRyDoNtUwAnNa
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2008-10-28 21:47:59]
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Re: Broken
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 10:14:04 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
Hang tuff.
Some times you just have to move on.
Take care.
Huggs, prayer, peace,
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Re: Broken
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by heartfelt on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 10:46:16 PM AEST
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