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Tired?
Contributed by
catz77
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Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 09:34:33 PM in AEST
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Falling off the carpet's cliff
I can't help but feel stiff
Here in this place
I lie with nothing but a face
the one that made you cry
all those years ago
My eyes only see
what you left near me
an empty glass
filled with your byes
I can't help but feel
That I should
forget the you
that left me here...
To fall asleep alone
.
Copyright ©
catz77
... [
2008-10-28 21:34:33]
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Re: Tired?
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by outlawpoet on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 09:38:10 PM AEST
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| some of your rhymes were forced but good job anyways i liked it liked it lots |
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Re: Tired?
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 10:26:36 PM AEST
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A bit sad but well written.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Tired?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 11:33:53 PM AEST
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A bit surreal and sad. Nice write.
Thanks,
Tim |
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Re: Tired?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th July 2009 @ 01:08:08 PM AEST
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Ah! The agony! The Anguish! The excellence!
-Phil |
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