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sealed mindset
Contributed by
weepingXxwillows
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Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 08:32:39 PM in AEST
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hbadday
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Every bite took,
a tear falls in its place.
I shouldn’t feel so tortured,
to look at a simple reflection.
Hideous, grotesque, and stout
the only three adjectives I feel are right for me.
The sad thing is,
this is not only skin deep.
My soul feels as frail,
as my old notebook that I so desperately cling to.
It seems out of my reach for help,
although it’s been recommended .
I let my thoughts strangle me long ago
besides this life was never mine to begin with.
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Re: sealed mindset
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by tswilkins on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 07:56:33 AM AEST
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That's what that little mean voice tells you to keep you from finding your true worth. I bet there is a lot within yourself that you haven't discovered that is beautiful. It's not an easy mindset to get rid of, but don't seal it--conquer it. You'll never find your beauty until you do. I can relate to how you feel, and I am glad I read your poem!
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Re: sealed mindset
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by outlawpoet on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 06:17:52 PM AEST
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| good write i liked it so much lots of emotion |
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