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LovE=MC2
Contributed by
Recyclebin
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Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 12:19:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I've tried to add another love
But that sum never equals you..
So I subtract the longing for you.
But it always seems to multiply
and has me divided by the fact you are gone.
Darling I'm no Einstein
But the way I figure it....
We had incalculable Love
And there is no Mathematical Formula
That could ever make me understand.
The Love I have for you......
Copyright ©
Recyclebin
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2008-10-28 00:19:31]
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Re: LovE=MC2
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 12:29:17 AM AEST
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I got teh privelege of being the first reader of this beautiful piece!!!!! Perhaps there's a geek dwelling in my heart. For I found this absolutely moving...
Thank you for sharing with us...
love smiles blessings
always
kara
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Re: LovE=MC2
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 12:40:18 AM AEST
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i liked the whole idea of putting love and math (2 completely different things) together, it actually worked. this is very creative and deep. it's true, u can't calculate love. it's domain and range reaches to infinity (a lil math stuff there for ya haha). great write. take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: LovE=MC2
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 04:24:50 AM AEST
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| Hey now that is too cool. Very clever idea you had with this one. Very enjoyable and once again, thanks for putting a smile on my face. |
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Re: LovE=MC2
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by outlawpoet on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 03:17:42 PM AEST
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| not a bad write better than the other i read. but its good to try new things. |
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Re: LovE=MC2
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 09:01:01 PM AEST
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Bin,
I think your mathematical metephors
are right on. Geek or not, this piece is well thought out and well written.
Great write....mike |
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Re: LovE=MC2
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 09:42:24 PM AEST
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Geek or no, very good work.
huggs, smiles,
blessings,
emy |
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Re: LovE=MC2
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 04:24:16 PM AEST
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Short, sweet, beautiful, and modern but not TOO modern. I liked this a lot. I like the way you use mathematics within your description of love. It's a light hearted poetic gem. Smirkingly romantic and clever.
BRAVO!
SCM |
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Re: LovE=MC2
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 08:38:45 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this the first time I read it but my head wasn't in the right place to comment..so I am catching up now...
Great stuff here.... very creative...
Jenni |
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