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~A Father Weeps Alone~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 11:38:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Somewhere in a darkened room
A father weeps alone.
Yesterday his world was bright,
Today, it’s a twilight zone.
Feeling lost and abandoned,
Bewildered and bereft,
Without his wife and baby
There is nothing left.
Questions unanswered
Confusion reigns,
How could anyone else
Understand his pains?
Tonight in a darkened room
A husband lies alone,
Thinking of the epitaph
He wants on his tombstone!
~~^~~
27th October, 2008
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
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2008-10-27 23:38:52]
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Re: ~A Father Weeps Alone~
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 12:50:39 AM AEST
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Wow, this is so devastating. You described his emotions out for us so well..
Thank you
Love ya
Kara |
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Re: ~A Father Weeps Alone~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 04:00:15 AM AEST
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Wow, Jenni, these emotional writes are painful. You have captured his pain and emotion very well. While I cannot relate to this 100% I can relate to parts of it. It reminds me a lot of a similar situation regarding my step son.
Take care and thanks for a great poem.
Tim |
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Re: ~A Father Weeps Alone~
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by navydocny on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 08:45:37 AM AEST
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Wow,
You've described the similar experience that I've been going through for the last two years. Very hurtful and well written. Describes well the confusion and despair!
Excellent!
Thank You,
Steve |
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Re: ~A Father Weeps Alone~
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 09:05:55 AM AEST
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Thank you all so much. I wrote this last night after hearing on the news of a baby who died right after birth and her mother followed. I heard the father talking and crying and decided to write this... Thanks again....
Jenni |
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Re: ~A Father Weeps Alone~
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by outlawpoet on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 03:21:52 PM AEST
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| ever read a poem that you swear is about you but the auther knows too little about you to have writen in ur name? this could be about me but i know its not either way i loved the scheme and flow of this great write |
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Re: ~A Father Weeps Alone~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 08:55:31 PM AEST
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Jenni,
very powerful write. You have captured
emotions held deep within the grief of
another. very well written...............mike |
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Re: ~A Father Weeps Alone~
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 09:31:47 PM AEST
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Wow jen,
This is heart wrenching but it shows your compassion for all.
Great writing and oh so much compassion.
huggs, blessings,
emy
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Re: ~A Father Weeps Alone~
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 07:40:47 PM AEST
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Thank God for the "Blessed Assurance" this man can have
of being reunited with his loved ones someday when he
crosses over the shore to the eternal side where all his
tears will be wiped away.
Beautiful poem Jenni and it is great to touch base with you again
after my long absence from writing.
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns (AKA: Lawdog) |
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Re: ~A Father Weeps Alone~
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 02:59:38 PM AEST
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Jenni,
Thanks for sharing this heartfelt poem. The sense of sadness is powerful and real. I can feel the pain he is is experiencing, and that of yours, the poet
Well done, if this is a real life situatiion you have my empathy. Either way,it is a powerful poem
Will |
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Re: ~A Father Weeps Alone~
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by Loende on
Thursday, 6th November 2008 @ 01:34:22 AM AEST
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Man, Jenni...that was raw, but rather lovely. It caught me and gripped my heart tightly. Great write. Congrats on the new baby girl in the family.
Be well,
~Loende |
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Re: ~A Father Weeps Alone~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th November 2008 @ 04:56:37 PM AEST
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| This is a really sad and powerful poem. Hope it is just great writing! |
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Re: ~A Father Weeps Alone~
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by Jlokitty on
Tuesday, 25th November 2008 @ 07:47:09 PM AEST
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Im sorry about what happened
that was a really good poem really sad too |
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Re: ~A Father Weeps Alone~
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by jcvamp on
Thursday, 27th November 2008 @ 07:08:41 AM AEST
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| Very touching. Nicely written. |
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Re: ~A Father Weeps Alone~
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by thewizard on
Monday, 27th April 2009 @ 11:15:17 AM AEST
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| A very touching poem, I can feel the fathers grief in your words. |
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Re: ~A Father Weeps Alone~
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by windowguy on
Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 04:32:02 AM AEST
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| Poignant,sad scene. Sensitively written. |
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