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Keep on dreaming
Contributed by
shelby
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Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 09:19:03 PM in AEST
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Our thoughts at times surface
taking us away to far away places.
We gather our moments together
and splash them in color across blank pages.
We spill our love freely,
at times our tears mingle together soft.
Hugs from afar, we embrace
always a warm wish and a thought.
We are the dreamers, we dance with clouds.
We run in the rain or dance in puddles.
For moments we can fly upon high
or swing with the fae, magic is what we make it.
Note: may all of your dreams come true no matter how big or small.
Keep dreaming.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-10-27 21:19:03]
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Re: Keep on dreaming
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by outlawpoet on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 09:25:52 PM AEST
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i like it maybe cause im a dreamer but i like it
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Re: Keep on dreaming
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by Crow on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 10:12:03 PM AEST
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| i`ve always been a dreamer Shel, still am, always will be. I like this write. |
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Re: Keep on dreaming
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by Recyclebin on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 10:15:57 PM AEST
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I have a quote I wrote.. would like to share it.
"Don't chase your dreams, hop on and ride them"
Now i just got this vision of Outlaw Poet.. Saying HEEHAW Bin...That dude is in my head..sorry okay back to you Michelle so sorry. lol.
The softness in this peice was really nice.. I loved it.
Thanks for sharing it..
I have a dream...wait that has already been used.. hmmm... Can I just have ur dream?? I'm sure it would be a nice one...
Hugs ~Bin~
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Re: Keep on dreaming
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 10:50:27 PM AEST
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But aren't we all dreamers!! This rings of such truth, Michelle....A beautiful write....from a beautiful soul...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Keep on dreaming
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 12:56:57 AM AEST
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Michelle~
may you always dream big and chase them with a smile! you deserve it!
thank you for this beautiful write...
love and smiles to you and yours always
kara |
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Re: Keep on dreaming
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 04:28:49 AM AEST
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Now this one is so damn absolutely beautiful, Michelle. Really, I just loved it. These are the kind I love to read and say, "wish I had written that!" Because... you said it sooooooooooooo well.
Dreamer Tim
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Re: Keep on dreaming
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 03:52:43 PM AEST
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Thank you for this one Michelle. Wonderfully done.
Reminding me to keep dreaming when all my dreams seem so out of reach and my world has grown dark and cold. I love ya girl, for putting a ray of sunshine on my day.
Peace
~Shannon |
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Re: Keep on dreaming
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 09:05:23 PM AEST
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Yes michelle, life is what dreams are
made for. When you stop dreaming,
you stop living.
great write.........Mike |
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Re: Keep on dreaming
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 04:42:50 PM AEST
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A sweet and wonderful flowing work of art Shelby! I loved this completely. It is warm, touching and all in all GRAND! The moral to this story is perfectly directed at the heart of the poet from the wonderful heart of a poet. A perfect trade of inspiration for compliment. I always find comfort in your words!
SUPERB!
Daniel |
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Re: Keep on dreaming
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 12:02:29 AM AEST
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Michelle, this was exquisite, as so much of your beauty is. Dreaming is
the perfect commodity. It costs nothing to indulge in it, and it only serves
to make the dreamer more rich at having had the audacity to dream.
I believe every great moment, thought, idea begins with a dream. And
that dream could be dreamt a MILLION and one times before it finally shows
its own merit and value. *wink*
Beautiful words, hun. I was thinking about you today. I was hanging these tiny
little personalized snow globes and one had the name, "shelby" on it. ^_^ Want
I should send it to you? You could hang it in the truck. lol
Hope all is well with you, Gary and the furkids! :D
*huge hugs*
~ Breezy
(off to dream *sigh*)
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