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I been down that road before
Contributed by
outlawpoet
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Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 04:42:21 PM in AEST
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Sometimes it's hard when life gets tough
People take and they take but never leave enough
Your Daddy is gone he passed away
You Can't find a lover that's willing to stay
Your body has changed and you're gettin older
Your heart is faded and your blood runs colder
The sky is gray and the sun won't shine
It's been so long since things have been fine
Loneliness rips through your soul you're a fugitive on the run
And it's hard to be around yourself with all that you've done
I know you have seen better days
and you feel shameful and sore
I know what it's like to be hurting this way
Cause i've been down that road before
So bury what's left of your selfish pride
Let vindication shine from deep inside
Walk today with your head up high
It's a beautiful thing to feel shame no more
Trust me friend
Cause I've been down that road before
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Re: I been down that road before
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by Lilymaemax on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 05:22:37 PM AEST
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| I love the thoughts in this poem.We all have history but its how we use our past experiences know shows the kind of person we are.Well said.Lilymae |
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Re: I been down that road before
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by shelby on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 05:32:52 PM AEST
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Yep been down that road, still on part of it at times.
You captured such emotion and wisdom in these lines. You are a talented writer my friend.
I agree with Lily too, nobody can capture us and keep us locked away and down unless we let them.
There is a will and a condition that keeps us pushing forward.
Hugs and thanks for the positive reflection in this write.
Super big hugs and a kiss on the cheek for ya
Michelle |
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Re: I been down that road before
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 06:36:27 PM AEST
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WOW!! With each new write that you post, I seem to enjoy your work more and more.. A very positive and mature write.... Thank you for sharing this..
Jenni |
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Re: I been down that road before
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by rebelwcause on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 08:00:28 PM AEST
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| hey its good to know someone out there has been down the same rd. |
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Re: I been down that road before
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by karoody on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 09:51:28 PM AEST
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i truly enjoyed this write. why should we live amongst all that shame? thank you for this message
love smiles
kara |
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Re: I been down that road before
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by Recyclebin on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 09:59:36 PM AEST
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Ha outlaw I really enjoyed this read man.. Hey can you give me some directions??? Coz man I'm lost on this road right now. :OO
~Bin~
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