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a stronger women
Contributed by
ribbons_and_lace09
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Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 12:37:43 PM in AEST
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She's a beautiful rare ruby with a heart of gold,
she met a guy who she fell head over heels for,
she gave him her fragile heart to hold,
he had one hand on her heart and the other on the door,
he put both hands on the door,
he left her heart scattered across the floor,
He left her mind clouded with confusion,
He's like a magician with a flawless illusion,
The hurtful words that were said to her rang in her ears,
Her body just sank to the floor in a puddle of tears,
she picked her self up and mended her broken heart,
she closed and locked the door that he left open,
he had changed her life from the start,
he made her a stonger women,
she will travel the world searching for the one,
and with a fresh page her journey has just begun.
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Re: a stronger women
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by shelby on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 03:14:03 PM AEST
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This took us on a roller coaster of emotions.
So sad what he did to this beautiful woman but so strong and filled with hope and life at the end.
Lovely write.
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Re: a stronger women
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by rebelwcause on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 07:45:38 PM AEST
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| true lots of emotions but thats life good write |
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Re: a stronger women
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 07:51:49 PM AEST
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Very deep with emotion. Though a very strong woman. Very nice read.
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