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Small Town
Contributed by
Recyclebin
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Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 12:07:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Here we go, living in this small town,
trying to escape the nail down.
The colors never seem to change
Like the leaves on the mountain range.
How did we ever know,
That we be stuck on life’s plateau?
Here we go again,
by the tracks watching another passing train.
Tonight the great debate,
Is what lies beyond the road of fate?
No one wants to be left behind,
Everyone laughs with an unconscious mind..
Passing another sip,
Tossing it like a poker chip.
Betting on our lives,
Holding on to our dreams, until it arrives.
This small town looks even smaller tonight,
High on life, so dim in the visible light.
Here we go again,
Heading down the hill like water down a drain.
Next weekend It will be the same dream,
About life’s color scheme.
Just another small town,
Locked down and weighed down.
Copyright ©
Recyclebin
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2008-10-26 00:07:44]
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Re: Small Town
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by zenith66 on
Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 12:23:36 AM AEST
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i think, at one point. we have all felt this, your words are certaintly honest ones, you have alot of nice images thorughout, " tossing it like a poker chiip" i liked that, sometimes we all just want to escape, but dont be so quick to want to leave what you know, oh well, nice peice here i enjoyed it!!
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Re: Small Town
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 10:51:39 AM AEST
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Growing up was such fun for us... It is a pity kids nowadays don't have similar experiences.... You have written of this so candidly... Thank you for sharing it with us..
Miss Jenni :>) |
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Re: Small Town
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by karoody on
Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 09:17:02 PM AEST
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I adadored this write from you! I remember those days very well. You have paid a good tribute to those yesteryears....
Thank you
Love smiles blessings to you and yours
Kara |
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Re: Small Town
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by shelby on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 12:42:59 AM AEST
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You made me smile, this brings back memories.
The train tracks and the dreaming of going..
Funny isn't it we wanted to leave now we want to return to those dreamy days.......
Hugs
Michelle |
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