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The Confrontaion
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 02:22:32 AM in AEST
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"It's cold and dark, I can barely see...."
Welcome to my world now here we be,
"A fight you wanted is a fight you will receive...."
You are weak, you can't take me,
"Your world is cold and love is lost...."
Stop with the chit chat, and step to the boss,
"The smell of death lingers in the air...."
Come on masked man no one cares,
"A fight to the death is what has been called...."
A battle of two titans, one must fall,
"It will hurt me more then it hurts you...."
Your damn right Phantom, the world will miss you,
"A place filled with so much pain...."
Shut your mouth stop playing games,
"For years now you've tried to destroy me...."
Well let's get it on so I can fulfill my destiny,
"Through the fires of hell I will walk...."
It's time to die enough with all this talk,
"To defeat you is now my mission...."
It's about time any last wishes?
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
Heart & Soul
Kane
Copyright ©
The_Phantom
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2008-10-25 02:22:32]
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Re: The Confrontaion
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by karoody on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 02:37:18 AM AEST
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Very interesting write, guys! lots of energy flowing here. Your styles work together well.
Take care
Kara |
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Re: The Confrontaion
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by shelby on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 04:50:24 PM AEST
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My Phantom and Kane,
this is energy here and the darkness in it could give me chills . I loved it...... you two write like same voice very good talent here.
hugs
Michelle |
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Re: The Confrontaion
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 07:27:46 PM AEST
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*Smiling here*
Awesome write, Matt..... I wouldn't like to be closeby....
So..how is my dear friend, Kane? Tell him I say to leave my friend, The Phantom alone or I will kick his butt....
Hugs
Jenni
P/S.. have to go read part one..not sure how I missed it.... I try to read all your posts... |
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Re: The Confrontaion
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 03:51:21 AM AEST
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Woo-hoo, the fight is on. Great follow up to The Meeting. I loved reading both of them and look forward to part three.
Thank you... very enjoyable. :D
Tim
(who sits in anticipation wondering who will win this duel of words) |
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Re: The Confrontaion
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by venkat on
Saturday, 4th April 2009 @ 11:50:34 PM AEST
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Oh..what a nice flow ..It is a wonderful match of words between two soldier spirits, Matt & Kane, equally bright and equally energetic..
God bless love and happiness:-)venkat |
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Re: The Confrontaion
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by 3660Days on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 08:47:57 PM AEST
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| That had a really nice "rhythm" and "mood" to it. Well done. |
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Re: The Confrontaion
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by wood on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 10:49:02 PM AEST
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I think this poem was wonderful.
it made me smile im just starting out writing
as a freshman in high school and
i think you just provided me with the inspiration i need for my next couple of works. |
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