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~As Two Souls Unite~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 08:38:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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~~^~~
I give you my shoulder so you may rest your head here
Thanks for your offer, I appreciate it, my dear...
Be silent so the only sound is the beating of our hearts,
Let's stay this way until it is time for us to part.....
This is so relaxing, I am thankful you are near.
I believe I want to spend eternity right here.
With you my worries I can cast away.
I know you will never have a mean thing to say.
Your words are sweeter than music to my ear
I have enjoyed your friendship for many a year
What more can a girl ask for but eternity
My friend, you have indeed made me very happy.
As our souls unite on this magical day
Let no person ever take it away
For we have achieved that, of which others only dream
While the embers from the fireplace dance and gleam
The memory of today, nothing shall erase
Sit with me again beside that fireplace.
What better way is there to end your birth week?
Than spending time with you cheek to cheek.
~~^~~
24th October, 2008
This actually was the result of some spontaneous rhyming today.
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Jenni_K
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Re: ~As Two Souls Unite~
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by Voice of the Silent on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 10:53:56 PM AEST
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well written this is the second team up poem i've seen and once again the pair seems to write good poetry when they write together as well as when the write apart
I liked it because it expresses your friendship very well |
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Re: ~As Two Souls Unite~
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by The_Phantom on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 01:09:43 AM AEST
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Awsome write, a moving piece to say the least, another heartfelt write, thank dear friend for the read.
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Re: ~As Two Souls Unite~
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by deadwriter on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 01:28:45 PM AEST
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Thank you Jenni for being a friend and an inspiration. I enjoyed rhyming back and forth. As I gain each year, life gets rougher. I am that much more grateful for every friend I have in my circle.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~As Two Souls Unite~
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by shelby on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 03:15:05 PM AEST
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You two write so well together. Beautiful write about friendship my buds.
Hugs
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Re: ~As Two Souls Unite~
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by heartfelt on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 04:04:09 PM AEST
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| aw! that is a very sweet poem and a beautiful way to end it. some say the best thing in life is finding that feeling like when two souls unite |
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Re: ~As Two Souls Unite~
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by navydocny on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 06:52:31 PM AEST
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Moving....
A true friendship can be as joyful as a true love affair.....
You have expressed that well....
Great write guys!
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Re: ~As Two Souls Unite~
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by Recyclebin on
Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 12:49:13 AM AEST
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Nice piece, I really enjoyed the way you two blend. Thanks for sharing.
~Bin~ |
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Re: ~As Two Souls Unite~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 09:30:24 PM AEST
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Very well written together. NoSaint and I wrote together and it is not as easy as I thought
it would be. You two did a great piece.
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Re: ~As Two Souls Unite~
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by karoody on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 11:11:01 AM AEST
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Jenni~
I just now got a chance to read this! I missed it at first and remembered that it this morning. I am very glad I did. This is very beautiful. This made me smile.
Great job to the both of you!!!
Love you
Smiles love blessings to you and yours always
kara |
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