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Wishing for sleep
Contributed by
theshmoo
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Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 11:39:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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thoughts kinda ran out of my head. All I can think about is in my room. my bed.
Tiredness covers me like the blanket i yearn for.
just to laydown and close the door.
nothing to keep me company but the shadows that dance on my wall.
Need to try and keep open these eyes, or asleep I'll fall.
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Re: Wishing for sleep
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 11:54:55 AM AEST
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| ahhh I have those very same thoughts sometimes, well said. |
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Re: Wishing for sleep
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by Voice of the Silent on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 11:00:50 PM AEST
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| simple yet still very good I liked it I suffer from insomnia so I have these thought's quite often |
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Re: Wishing for sleep
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by heartfelt on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 04:19:39 PM AEST
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| thats it now im tired thank....haha nice work |
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