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Look At Me
Contributed by
lnnie
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Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 10:15:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Look at me
Look at my mouth,
the little up-curve at the ends;
Look at my hair
the way I flip it when I talk;
Look at what I wear
some of it is for you.
Notice how I smell.
Notice my shaved legs
and the birthday card on the shelf;
Come close to me;
lean in when we talk.
Touch my face sometimes.
Notice the brown specks
in my green eyes;
touch me
when I walk by;
And laugh a little
for no reason
when you say hello.
Look at me
at odd times
from across the room.
Back into me at parties
expecting a hug
from behind
And thank you love
cause you do all this
all the time.
Copyright ©
lnnie
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2008-10-23 22:15:31]
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Re: Look At Me
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by shelby on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 12:46:14 AM AEST
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sounds like love, nice
Michelle |
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Re: Look At Me
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by jesusofholland on
Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 11:28:58 PM AEST
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| Wow, what a lucky guy. Great write. It seems this is all many women want, for us to notice the little things. I learned this the hard way. |
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