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Light and Dark
Contributed by
deadIMPULSE
on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 05:10:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Feel the dark closing in
The nightmare's about to begin
Open yourself to the pain
And let it in like rain
You always knew you couldn't win
A new world age you will begin
One of death and hate
There is no more need to wait
See the pain we are starting,
The crowds that we are parting
Feel the misery brought
and commands without thought
Hear the screams of the dead,
let them fill you head
Use the hatred and pain
Let it fill your veins.
Leave the darkness in your heart
No more will the crowds part
The evil inside you
Is welling out anew.
Should dark troops find purchase in your land
Know only that you all shall die by my hand
And that which you have, becomes mine
And, though you try, the light will never shine
Know this, your only hope is to start again
and surrender yourself to the pain
It will bind you and then release
Your soul returns piece by piece
On dreary futures and midnights past
Light and dark unite
And though the dice of fate are cast,
we still may win this fight.
Copyright ©
deadIMPULSE
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2008-10-23 17:10:14]
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Re: Light and Dark
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by outlawpoet on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 05:33:52 PM AEST
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| this was a good poem i liked it. it seems there are more free verse poems on here lately its good to see some verse rhyme out there good job |
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Re: Light and Dark
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by shelby on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 01:24:03 AM AEST
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I liked the contrast in this. Rhyme good too.
Hugs
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Re: Light and Dark
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by deadIMPULSE on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 08:28:28 PM AEST
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Thanks, I wote it on my profile in a game and I finally finished with that. I liked the last line the most.
"On dreary futures and midnights past
Light and dark unite
And though the dice of fate are cast,
we still may win this fight." |
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