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I like ...
Contributed by
corujuca
on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 12:42:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I like the way
you lie to me,
i like the way
you said
you are not free.
I like the way
you smile at me,
i like the way
you said
you dreamed of me.
I like the soft words
that in my ears
you softly spoke.
I like the breeze
that i feel
when you leave home.....
I like to feel
that ..
i miss you
so much!
Copyright ©
corujuca
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2008-10-23 12:42:34]
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Re: I like ...
(User Rating: 1 )
by outlawpoet on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 01:52:19 PM AEST
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| its always good to put ur feelings out there. if your gonna use verse and rhyme you maybe should not use the same words to rhyme repeatedly just my thought but overall good write i like it |
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Re: I like ...
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by shizzle on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 11:48:11 PM AEST
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| i like the shortness of the lines great job |
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