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The next morning
Contributed by
Theshmoo
on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 10:46:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Woke up this morning my head full of cotton. The taste of metallic fungi sat in my mouth. My
mind empty as a hollow canyon. Morning sounds filled the air and swam through my head.
My skin felt tight and raw as a corpse. I knew I was breathing but felt so dead.
Smoked my first ciggerett of the day, It's nicotene soothing my body and mind.
My head slowly welcoming the first thoughts in so long. I felt last nights sour sins and this mornings emptyness combine. My temper short, my anxiety long, I felt my new found peace comfort me, sliding into my hollow heart.
Smiled to myself and lit another ciggerett and was ready for today. Held my mind together from last night's falling
apart, tonight I'm ready once again to pray
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Theshmoo
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2008-10-23 10:46:24]
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Re: The next morning
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by karoody on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 11:39:48 AM AEST
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wow, quite an image there. welcome to ypdc!
best of luck to you. than kyou for sharing this with us
smiles
kara |
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Re: The next morning
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by outlawpoet on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 03:04:26 PM AEST
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| good write i like the way you used comparison in this poem glad your free of this now god bless |
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Re: The next morning
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by shizzle on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 11:43:43 PM AEST
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| Good job sis. how many more of these you got this one is really good |
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