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YOU!!!!!!!!!!
Contributed by
gribba
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Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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YOU!!!!!!!!!!
Frozen pond
thick ice
cold and hard
like your heart
strong wind and snow
thrown into my face
and into my heart
like you're words
the storm that follows you
rip’s me of the ground
and blows me away
like a little flower
that has no place in this world
Copyright ©
gribba
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2003-03-20 06:35:00]
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Re: YOU!!!!!!!!!!
(User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 01:52:06 AM AEST
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| you write with such passion and intensoty... excellent... blessings... |
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Re: YOU!!!!!!!!!!
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by venkat on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 01:55:35 AM AEST
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| Very imaginative and powerful write.. I appreciate your expression. venkat |
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Re: YOU!!!!!!!!!!
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 04:37:37 PM AEST
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| great imagery to express difficult and intense feelings |
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Re: YOU!!!!!!!!!!
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 05:07:20 PM AEST
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| You certainly have a gift for conveying emotion. |
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