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Autumn
Contributed by
redsleeve
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Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 05:56:51 PM in AEST
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the sun catches up
autumn moon still sitting high
crispy morning sky
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Re: Autumn
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 07:16:56 PM AEST
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i like it a lot,
you definitely have the format right,
nice job,
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Re: Autumn
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by outlawpoet on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 07:44:48 PM AEST
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| good write i am a big fan of simplicity |
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Re: Autumn
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 08:16:05 PM AEST
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Well done!! Are you sure this is your first haiku? Cuz this is really good....
Would love to see more....
I also have a haiku by that name....
Thanks for showing another perspective..
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Re: Autumn
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by karoody on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 07:22:58 AM AEST
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wow! you got it right and you've done it beautifully! love the image you gave us here....
thank you
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kara |
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Re: Autumn
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by zenith66 on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 10:34:36 AM AEST
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| VERY NICE, I WAS VERY IMPRESSED AT THE FEELING YO MANAGED TO CAPTURE IN SUCH A SHORT PEICE, i love a good haiku, and this comes straight out of the top drawer, great writing my friend. |
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Re: Autumn
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by shizzle on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 11:41:58 PM AEST
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| short sweet and to the point. love it |
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