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Of all the things ive seen
Contributed by
outlawpoet
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Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 03:06:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I have seen sunshine and I have seen rain
I have seen snow piled high into the sky
And I have seen laughter and pain
I have seen the streets flowing with bikes and cars
I have seen planes flying high up in the sky
And I have seen the sky blanketed with stars
I have seen loved ones just waiting on death
I have seen sadness and tears, happiness and cheers
And I have seen the results of giving all you had left
I have seen many things in my time this is true
But in all my days of living my rambling ways
Darlin nothing compares to you
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2008-10-22 15:06:22]
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Re: Of all the things ive seen
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by rebelwcause on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 03:12:35 PM AEST
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| wow man you have a way with words. i do not know of anyone who can rhyme this way and even rhyme withn a line and keep the flow. wow man great work. you inspire me to challenge my rhyming skills anyone can write free form |
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Re: Of all the things ive seen
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by karoody on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 04:07:55 AM AEST
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You surprised me, friend! I did not look at the poem category. I rarely do. I was not sure where you were taking me with this write, but I did not expect you to leave me with a smile. This is a wonderful tribute to your love. I hope you have shared it with her.
Smiles
Kara |
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