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tick tock
Contributed by
elizabeth395
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Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 12:31:22 PM in AEST
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HumorPoetry
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Tick Tock 12 oclock
tick tock an hour till 1
tick tock can't wait till to 2
tick tock what do i do
tick tock 3 oclock
tick tock get ready to run
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Re: tick tock
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by Voice of the Silent on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 05:37:44 PM AEST
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Sounds more like a dark poem but i see how it's funny
the first poem i wrote was called tick tock and that's what drew me in
But I'm glad it did this was a good wite
And can't wait to see more
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Re: tick tock
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by karoody on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 08:10:23 AM AEST
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clockwatching! grrrrr!
makes that second hand
move slower it seems!
cute write!
thanks for the smiles!
smiles to you as well
kara |
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