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Linen Sea
Contributed by
wizard
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Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 09:27:48 AM in AEST
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Woven within this sublime sea of linen,
Ripples, crashing waves, and shifting tides entice,
This splendid night we hoped would be, here at last.
The moonlight shimmers on its vast silky surface
As we frolic in every ebb and flow … undertow ripping, incessantly…
Not a ship in sight, each surging swell ours for the taking.
Drenched in the delight of our delicate, modest sea.
Riding each soaring salty crest , engulfed by every pulling through.
Winds scream across our lobes, dripping necks guide our tongues.
Tidal fervor billows, commanding our every move
as we eagerly navigate these treacherous waters;
Hurricanes met with disregard as our own storm rages.
Tsunamis briefly rise but quickly yield to our wake,
Returning from whence they came; dolefully,
Shamed by our splendor and our magnificent voyage.
As we tread, rogue waves arise, yet pale beside our arousal.
Drowning in the rippling spread, not a care exists;
With great pleasure we succumb to its wrath, ever willing.
Copyright ©
wizard
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Re: Linen Sea
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 10:31:25 AM AEST
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wiz~
you wrote this beautifully
such an amazing peice
thank you for sharing
smiles
kara |
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Re: Linen Sea
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 01:17:29 PM AEST
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A wonderfully written piece, Paul...well done..
Jenni |
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Re: Linen Sea
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by shizzle on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 10:06:31 PM AEST
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| it remindes me of a water bed, never mind cheesie joke but i liked it alot you got crazy talent, but you dont need me to tell you that. |
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Re: Linen Sea
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 10:22:26 PM AEST
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Friend, I gotta tell you this is an awesome, hot write.
Smiles, huggs,
emy
Beautifully written. |
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Re: Linen Sea
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 01:20:59 PM AEST
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| This was a really good poem. I enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: Linen Sea
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 12:40:12 AM AEST
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beautifully loving and passionate,
hugs n' love nessa |
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