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Fall Dreaming
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 11:33:43 PM in AEST
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Shhhhh can you hear it? Listen close.
Yes it is the wind in the trees
dancing colored leaves, tossing to and fro carefree.
Lets gather our dancing clothes and just be.
Changes, tis they come, they go, they breath.
A drum beat, a fine tune, a farewell, a renew.
Summer has gone, Fall soon with leave.
The golden, red, pink hazes with be gone.
Winters breath will frost each branch, bare
into little drops of diamonds, yet its beautiful.
Changes, tis they come, they go, they breath
A drum beat, a fine tune, a farewell, a renew.
Even in the coldest frost of winter,
a rose can still bud and bloom, transformed,
better things, new places, faces, time stands still
and we dream........
Fall dreaming once more.
Thanks you 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-10-21 23:33:43]
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Re: Fall Dreaming
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 12:20:36 AM AEST
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Awesome graphics and beautifull writing.
huggs, smiles, blessings,
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Re: Fall Dreaming
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 05:36:01 AM AEST
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My wild desert princess~
Gosh girlfriend this is absolutely beautiful.
The imagery you cast into your readers head
is spellbinding and sensational. A captivating
write from start to finish.
Why worry and have wrinkles
When you can smile and have dimples~
Thanks for the smiles sweetie.
love ya my wild desert princess,
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Re: Fall Dreaming
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 08:20:32 AM AEST
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Girl, you drag whoener there!!! keep smiling and keep these beautiful poems coming...
I am loving them!!!!
hugs and lovuns always
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Re: Fall Dreaming
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 09:08:07 PM AEST
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am loving this
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