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The Fear
Contributed by
redsleeve
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Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 09:20:54 PM in AEST
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you say you want to be with me
but are unsure of what to do
you should know
i'm scared too
of course,
contused and rued are possibilities
real hurt is shunning a chance at this
yearning, burning inside me I
dream of a role in 'your happiness'
you say your bed's more comfortable
when i'm laying next to you
still so unclear
will this leave a bruise?
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2008-10-21 21:20:54]
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Re: The Fear
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by Chamaron on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 12:50:14 AM AEST
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| I know what you mean. The best of luck to you. |
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Re: The Fear
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by Loende on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 09:27:42 PM AEST
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Holy cow that's just great. I completely understand your word choices here and it works just wonderfully. It's just lovely.
Great Job!
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: The Fear
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by karoody on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 08:47:18 AM AEST
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Loende said it perfectly! Great write! I look forward to reading more from you
thank you
best of luck to you
smiles love blessings
kara
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