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You Can't Know
Contributed by
catz77
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Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 08:08:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Our hearts burned together
Raging with anger and hatred
For all the things in the world
That mocked us
Forced us into a vast cage of
wet feathers and dry droppings
We needed a way out
Our hearts burned
Burned through the metal and together
We will burn the Earth for doing this to us
For teaching us to hate, to love being wrong.
'~(0_0)~'
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Re: You Can't Know
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 09:15:24 PM AEST
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hey catz,
an amazing little piece here,
i can feel the emotion scream through...
nicely done,
wiz |
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Re: You Can't Know
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by karoody on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 08:56:50 AM AEST
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The world can definitely disappoint and send our hearts in the wrong direction if we let it. I for one have been here before.
Thank you
Kara |
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Re: You Can't Know
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by karoody on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 08:56:56 AM AEST
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The world can definitely disappoint and send our hearts in the wrong direction if we let it. I for one have been here before.
Thank you
Kara |
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Re: You Can't Know
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by outlawpoet on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 07:45:40 PM AEST
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| good write i loved it thaks for sharing it on here for us to read |
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Re: You Can't Know
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by rebelwcause on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 08:09:29 PM AEST
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hello darlin
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Re: You Can't Know
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th July 2009 @ 01:23:59 PM AEST
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Very good indeed. It just all seemed to 'work'.
That's sure to win an award for the feeblest comment on your-poetry this year, sorry about that.
-phil |
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