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today
Contributed by
LadyDama
on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i started to write you a poem
but didn't know what to say
i started to sing you a love song
but my pride got in the way
i started to tell you i'm sorry
for the hurtful things i've said
i started to tell you i love you
but went to bed instead
why do we play this dreadful game
of battles that shouldn't be fought
why do we drive each other insane
with this bonded life we've bought
i do write you poetry i do sing you songs
i do say i'm sorry and i've loved you for so long
so today i start a new day
and hope you'll be there too
today i plan on trying
to cherish me and you...
Copyright ©
LadyDama
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2003-03-20 05:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: today
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 05:46:51 AM AEST (User
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Very lovely write.. venkat |
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Re: today
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 06:14:14 AM AEST (User
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This is so lovely ... my Mum always told me never to go to bed (sleep) after you've had a fight - always make up first - very good advice :))) Jan |
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Re: today
(User Rating: 1 ) by spooky on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 06:16:02 AM AEST (User
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beautifully written ,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: today
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 12:43:58 PM AEST (User
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beautifully written lovely
shari |
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Re: today
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chef-Boy-R-C on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 12:56:58 PM AEST (User
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I'm lovin' it. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: today
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 05:52:52 PM AEST (User
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I love this!! You do such a nice job!!
Michelle |
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Re: today
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 05:54:14 AM AEST (User
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Great writing. Keep it up!!
sleepless_siren |
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