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Cracked
Contributed by
Recyclebin
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Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 12:35:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Drowning and trying to suppress
a past, so long ago.
The burn smothers,
my most inner immortal shine.
Consuming it,
Until only
dark matter materializes.
Trying to once again dream,
But so empty, imagery
That no longer exists.
The substance of reality
Long gone, from this world of mine.
Living has regressed,
to the stage of suffocation.
Searching, hoping to
Find that glimmer of light.
This journey so profound,
An never quite seems to end.
Memories harbor my haunting,
Preserving my human anguish.
Once changed
I’ll never be the same.
My soul,
Cracked can never be unbroken.
Copyright ©
Recyclebin
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2008-10-21 00:35:13]
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Re: Cracked
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 02:10:29 AM AEST
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This is sad but really well written.
We all have a past and even tho God forgives the hardest part is forgiving self.
I'm sure the majarity of us have cracked souls.
Awesome writing.
huggs, blessings,
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Re: Cracked
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 02:34:50 AM AEST
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bin~
you have really done something amazing here. your ability to get those ideas and emotions out there is astounding. i applaud your talent. i sincerely do.
love smiles blessings
kara |
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