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Poison
Contributed by
justme03
on
Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 11:33:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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At sip number one, you had me.
I became your slave
and I can’t be torn away.
Only way I will leave you baby,
is by walking away by myself.
You’re my sweet yet bitter poison.
You put a smile on my face
and make my world spin at a safer pace.
When you’re in my arms I have an excuse.
I did it because you made me, I had no other choice.
You are my safety net
and a perfect bet
that I’ll be at peace tonight.
One more baby and I’ll be fine,
but one turns to two
and then more
and finally I hit the floor.
I wanted to be here all night.
You’re my sweet yet bitter poison.
I’m glad I found you
and I’m never gonna leave you!
Copyright ©
justme03
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2008-10-20 11:33:25]
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Re: Poison
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by outlawpoet on
Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 02:33:31 PM AEST
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| good write.. not sure how theraputic it was for you but good write i enjoyed it |
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Re: Poison
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by Voice of the Silent on
Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 05:05:43 PM AEST
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good write i liked it
As for drinking problems I go to a bar everyday but don't drink but i've seen plenty of people who do and have a problem
my advice to you is get some good friends to help you quit or at least cut down on the drinking |
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Re: Poison
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 01:43:13 AM AEST
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I'd say you got this one right on the money.
I especially like the title cause that tells it like it is.
Hang tuff friend.
Huggs, prayer, blessings,
emy |
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