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To the girl I cant stop thinking about
Contributed by
TheOneandOnly
on
Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 08:12:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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To the girl I can’t stop thinking about
I think about you everyday
And this is why I pray
That you will see the real me
And not what everyone else sees
Because I see your true beauty in everyway
What else can I say?
I tried everything after that night
To make you see I was Mr. Right
But you pushed me away
What else can I say?
And I think about you every day
And this is what I pray
That you will see the real me in every way
But I’m scared at night
Because what I went through that you will accept me for who I am
And this is way I pray
Because I’ve been told I’m a nice guy and sometimes I ask myself why
That is a bad thing
That I cannot express my true feelings in every way because I was hurt in so many ways
That I and no one else will understand
And every time, I fight my fears and shake back tears
This is what I what went through…
So here is my story please understand…
What I went through, the pain and torment that I felt
Through three plus years of hell
I put up with here because I thought she loved me in every way
But she hurt me
Because she pushed me away
What else can I say?
But after time of beating myself up of what I thought I had screwed up, I realized
That I’m not wrong I did everything I could to make us strong
But you decided to call me on that day and told this is not gonna work out, no way
And I was torn up inside
And for three days I cried…
But after time I met some one
And I’m afraid to be her guy… because of what I went through
Nervous
Anxious
I try to take it slow
But I think I messed up again
Because she pushes me away
And I don’t know what to say
You told me you fall for the nice guys.
And this is why I wonder
What did I do wrong, did I hurt you in some way?
And I want this crap to finish its course
But you are afraid… I can see it in your eyes
I can hear it in your voice…
The way you back off from me
I want you to see that I...
Can’t stop thinking about you
That why I want to hang out with you...
I want to show you the real me.
But This is what always happens to me
Too nice, too shy
AND THEN AGAIN I ASK MYSELF WHY???
And this is why I pray that someday down the road
Even though we both been treated cold that we will look each other’s way
And we will realize that what went wrong that day
Wrong time, wrong place
Neither of us could see that day
That we both had feelings for each other in our own way
But of the dangers that presented us
And the fears we could not out grow
Made us push each other way
And this is why sometimes we give up our fights
To look for Mr. /Mrs. Right
Copyright ©
TheOneandOnly
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2008-10-20 08:12:46]
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Re: To the girl I cant stop thinking about
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by Puppy on
Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 09:05:00 AM AEST
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Wow!! i felt like crying while reading your poem it was so moving! this is a fantastic write well done. I really hope that things work out for you!
Puppy :) |
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Re: To the girl I cant stop thinking about
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by outlawpoet on
Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 02:36:58 PM AEST
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| good write very emotional my only advice is maybe shorten it up sometimes you can say the most by saying just a little maybe rewrite it shorter and see which one is like the best or fits the best. good luck bro great write |
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Re: To the girl I cant stop thinking about
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 09:29:40 AM AEST
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so much emotion in this, great job. i look forward to more from you.
best of luck to you
smiles
kara |
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