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Insanity's door
Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
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Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Sitting, weeping inside this silver, golden candlelight
Fighting the pain and fighting for life
Anger washes the hurt away; it’s all gone,
As you ponder over the things you shouldn’t have done, it’s so numb.
The silver moonlight takes your tears and you’re lost inside the spell –
Lying there, at that moment, this magick is everything you’ve ever felt
-And they whisper-
How they would teach you to love them
And their darkened caress
How they can kiss the hurt away
With their barbed-wire grace
How they will make it better
With their beautiful embrace
As the window fades away again.
-Just step through-
Chained to this, chained to the kiss,
Choking back tears as you reminisce;
Remember their first ever kiss
That bliss…
Don’t ever tell me you never wanted this.
-Wake up-
Lying, crying inside these haunted eyes,
It’s all the same and nothing’s changed
Broken tears wash away the words I say
As you wonder why it happened this way, in this rain
The golden sunlight refuses your tears and you’re forced inside yourself –
Sitting here, as the window closes, this pain is everything you’ve ever felt.
-Scream-
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2003-03-20 04:05:00]
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Re: Insanity's door
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 05:38:47 PM AEST
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Wow, Lucie this was amazing I remember u sent this to me. Thnx for sharing this, this was absolutely amazing, mindblowing. An absolutely beautiful sad poem.
Love you,
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Re: Insanity's door
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 05:50:10 AM AEST
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If you don't win that competition, there is no justice. That poem is amazing!
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Re: Insanity's door
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 07:15:16 AM AEST
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| an awesome poem, it has to win, but just in writing it you know you are a winner |
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Re: Insanity's door
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by AngryPrincess on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 01:34:31 PM AEST
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lucie, just like everyone else has said, if you dont win the contest with this poem, the judges are friggin insane...this was amazing. It so unreal how honest and open you can be about everything going on in your head. The best part is you're sharing these beautiful images with each and every one of us. Thats an honor dear friend. keep it up. :O)
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Re: Insanity's door
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:35:57 PM AEST
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as with all your other poems i have read this is beautifully sad. i really love your work. your earning the title of my favourite poet. well done
love and hugs
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